explore my optimistic world

This exact story (exact words used), I wrote when I was in high school (hmmn, six years ago? am not sure) but I still keep the copy. Pasensya na sa mga wrong subject-verb agreement. Simple lang din ang plot. No changes made.

In the village near Mt. Chize, there lived a peaceful family. The father’s name was Pablo and he earns a living through farming. The mother was Nadia and she was a housewife. They had three daughters. The eldest daughter, Teresa was intelligent and when she graduated in elementary, she became the salutatorian. So during her secondary, she became a half-scholar student in a private school. She has also a talent in singing. In fact, she has a very beautiful voice. But this talent of her was kept secretly. The second daughter whose name is Raya was very talkative. She has a smart body. Among the three, she was the most hard-headed. She was an expert in dancing. The youngest daughter named Cara was the most beautiful among them. She was also intelligent. She dressed like a super model. There were many boys who loved her beauty.

One day, they had a problem. The land that their father was working, was bought by a lawyer. The father was searching for a new job, but no one accepted him because he was already old. Their father did not want her wife to work because she has a disease.

So their eldest daughter was forced to stop schooling. The first job that she applied for was a saleslady in a Department Store. She did her duty responsibly, so her salary increased.

When she saved an amount of her salary, she sent money to her family every month. Because of her being responsible to her work, she has been promoted to the Department Store in Manila.

While still in Manila, she heard about the “Search for a Diva” contest. She was very interested to join the contest to show her real talent. So she joined the audition, and she was accepted by the judges. So she was able to join the final ten to proceed to the final.

She was very proud to send a letter to her family that she will compete for the Grand Finals of the contest.

During the Grand Finals, her supporters and families were there. She was very excited to sing her favorite song, “Say That Word” during the finals.

When she was done singing, she was very excited to know the Grand winner. During the announcement of the grand winner, she cried very loud. She thanked God for giving this opportunity to her to be the grand winner, and for giving this blessing to her.

And after few weeks, she was very famous because of winning the contest. Until, there was a star manager who gave an opportunity to her to be one of the guests of the show entitled, “ASAP”.

The hosts of the show liked her performance. So they got her to be a regular guest of the show. Then she accepted it. Why not? It’s a big break. So she became one of the popular singers in the country. She held the title, “The Super Diva.”

She decided that her younger sister will finish college in Manila. And after graduating, she introduced her younger sister to her manager that she was an expert in dancing. Then the manager tested how graceful her sister danced. And the manager liked it.

Her younger sister was also very famous in dancing. In dancing, she was the girl that was immediately called to be a trainer. Until, she became one of the guests in any show.

The eldest sister decided to have Cara finished her college in Manila. Cara was a beautiful girl, so she was the one representing in any beauty pageant. Then she heard about the “Miss Philippines” contest. Many of her friends encouraged her to join. Before she decided to join, she asked first permission from her elder sisters and parents, and they agreed to her decision.

With the help of God, she got the triumph and got the crown of “Miss Philippines”. Her sisters and parents cried with happiness. They didn’t thought that Cara will win. And she was very famous wherever she goes because of her dazzling beauty.

One of the model managers got her to be one of the models in Bench wear. She accepted it without any hesitation. She became one of the super models in the country.

Teresa, Raya and Cara became popular. Then their names were change—Teresa became Theresse, Raya became Rheanne, and Carla became Carylle.

Their family was well known all around the country because of their richness and talent.